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I love my fan fiction. I really do! Ever since I started writing it, so much creativity inside me has come to life that I never knew existed. I submitted it onto fanfiction.net and have received really good feedback so far.
However today, I received feedback that has bothered me more than it probably should. Someone said on a review of the fourth chapter of my work that I failed to portray GLaDOS's personality and made her seem like a generic antagonist. I have always tried to portray GLaDOS as well as possible. I have tried to make her seem like a wickedly intelligent and malevolent AI who is as psychotic and manipulative as hell but also is funny and sympathetic. I thought I was doing alright.
Be honest, people. If you have read my fan fiction, how do you feel about how I have portrayed GLaDOS? Do I need to make some more changes? I have already been inspired to add more dialogue to chapter 3, but do I need to do more? What do you think?
Leave your replies in the comments below.
However today, I received feedback that has bothered me more than it probably should. Someone said on a review of the fourth chapter of my work that I failed to portray GLaDOS's personality and made her seem like a generic antagonist. I have always tried to portray GLaDOS as well as possible. I have tried to make her seem like a wickedly intelligent and malevolent AI who is as psychotic and manipulative as hell but also is funny and sympathetic. I thought I was doing alright.
Be honest, people. If you have read my fan fiction, how do you feel about how I have portrayed GLaDOS? Do I need to make some more changes? I have already been inspired to add more dialogue to chapter 3, but do I need to do more? What do you think?
Leave your replies in the comments below.
An Ode to a Southern January
Boredom, so much boredom. The lights and decorations have been put away. There’s nothing to look at. We have no more holidays to celebrate. There’s nothing to look forward to. Our friends and family have to go back to work. There’s nothing else to do. Cold, so much cold We have no snow on the ground to brighten the world. There’s no beauty to admire. The air outside is getting too frigid to appreciate. There’s no reason to spend time outside. The flora is dead like our spirits and our motivations. There’s no vigor or life in the world. Aimless, so aimless. What is there to look forward to when the skies are so gray? What warmth is there to give or feel when the world is so cold? What reason is there to hope when the love of the season has faded away so quickly? Yet there is also hope, so much hope. This month is the first one after the year’s end. With that comes the chance to reflect. This month is the first one in the new year. With that comes the chance to make
Feeling Better about Life in Christmastime 2023
Merry Christmas, everyone! Thanks for being here with me during a year when I struggled heavily with depression. I am in a much better place than I was in before. I know life doesn't end when you don't have everything together at 30 now. I know it's okay to ask for help. I know I don't need to be good enough. I know that I deserve to live in this world. Thank you so much to everyone who has supported me and this story. May you have a blessed holiday season and a wonderful new year!
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Happy Thanksgiving!
Oh, this year has been a rough one, guys. I've let depression kick my ass and keep me from church and pursuing jobs as much as I should. I'm still underemployed. I still have a boyfriend. I have amazing friends. My family drives me crazy, but I still love them. I'm grateful for all of them. I'm grateful for my writing. I'm grateful for God for never abandoning me. I'm grateful for you guys, too. Especially @Twilight-na and @MrM0rtis, you guys have been great.
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All that matters is that you're happy with what you write. We all have different views, and you can't please everyone that reads what you write. I myself have had backlash on my work on fanfiction.net, but I respect their opinions and am not letting them get the best of me. If there's anything for you to go by, it's the story itself; Chelsea is standing firm in the face of improbable odds, and you should do so as well.